To grade our essays Mr. bergey have us a new way of editing thorugh audiofile; and asked for our opinion. Personally, I think that this method is much better that normal editing. It tells you exactly what the teacher thought at the moment when reading your essay. I believe another benefit is that while you listen to the changes the teacher advices, you can actually do the changes. However, not everything was beneficial, as Mr. bergey said himself, he was very negative and did not mention almost none of the things that he found good about our essay, but that is just something he needs add to his comments. In summary I believe it is a much better form of editing, the only adjustment i would make would be to add the good comments.
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